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Title: A Reflection on Mary Oliver’s “Wild Geese” In Wild Geese, Mary Oliver speaks to us about acceptance and belonging, reminding us that we don’t have to constantly seek perfection or meet others’ expectations. From...

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Title: A Reflection on Mary Oliver’s “Wild Geese”

In Wild Geese, Mary Oliver speaks to us about acceptance and belonging, reminding us that we don’t have to constantly seek perfection or meet others’ expectations. From “You do not have to be good”(Oliver 1), Oliver mentions to us that we need to accept ourselves as we are. Using nature as a time that continues without judgment, we too can find peace and belonging in the world. The poem shifts between our inner struggles and how the world keeps moving on no matter what, “let the soft animal of your body love what it loves” (Oliver 4). It creates a way of permission to just be yourself without overthinking. As the setting of her poem reveals the sun and the rain over landscapes, makes this whole situation feel personal peace. Oliver also brings out nature as a source to calm us down. Words such as “Meanwhile” that are repetitive create a reminder to us that while we’re caught up in whatever is going inside nature doesn’t stop. Such as, “Meanwhile the sun and the clear pebbles of the rain are moving across the landscapes”(Oliver 8). Reading this line created an image of how the world keeps turning no matter what we’re going through. Her language is simple but full of feeling, “You do not have to be good,” it’s a very straightforward sentence but it’s emotionally powerful because it breaks down this idea that we constantly have to prove ourselves or seek forgiveness for just who we are. A small sentence but a strong feeling giving a mix of emotions such as guilt or self judgmentone feels as we grow older and wiser. There’s a part where she says, “Tell me about despair, yours, and I will tell you mine. Meanwhile the world goes on” (Oliver 6), and it really puts things into perspective. Letting us know that yes we struggle and will face our ups and downs but the world keeps moving and we

Danny Quito Tenezaca09/30/24Dr. L CarpenterFQWIS 10108 (Writing Section)Title: A Reflection on Mary Oliver’s “Wild Geese”can find comfort in knowing we’re not alone. That someone out there will sit by our side and listen which creates a comfort in me. The last part where she says the world “calls to you like thewild geese” and announces “your place in the family of things” (Oliver 16). Bringing back again the thought of feeling disconnected or lost but we belong in any where we go and that was good. Oliver’s message that “you do not have to be good” (Oliver 1), reminds me of the time when I felt like I had to constantly meet others’ expectations or aim for perfection, whether in my studiesor in relationships. I remember feeling a similar kind of peace, as when I went camping and just being around the environment telling me I was okay to just exist to not be constantly wanting to be better. Connecting back to the wild geese when I notice a folk of birds flying away from the river bringing a thought of freedom as they fly freely in the sky.Connecting back to, “You do not have to be good” (Oliver 1), speaks to us about our past experiences of self-doubt. Using the words such as good is simple but powerful because it mentions the social expectations people expect from us to be constantly improving ourselves. The meaning from “Wild Geese” is one of acceptance and belonging. Oliver creates such well descriptions of nature and having humanity feel connected to themself.

Eco-Literacy Narrative 

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Eco-Literacy Narrative 

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 “How Wild Kratts Inspired My Love for Nature”

The very first show that impacted me growing up was “Wild Kratts”, a PBS Kids show that used a mix of live-action/animation and focused on the values of nature and the creatures roaming free in the wild. Each new episode introduced me to Martin and Chris Kratt, two adventurous brothers who, alongside their friends. Using “Creature Power Suits” to activate specific animal traits and adventure into the wild meeting new creatures and learning how they live and act. 

One episode that stands out in my memory is ‘Bass Class.’ I remember sitting on the edge of my seat as Martin and Chris met Gavin, whose passion for bass fishing was clear as he proudly displayed his trophy and fishing kit. Although this episode mainly focused on Gavin trying to catch the heavier bass and win against Zach before sundown, the excitement in Gavin’s eye and the pride in his voice resonated with me. A deep sense of curiosity and desire to experience the thrill of fishing first hand enlightened my soul within me.

 I rushed towards my dad once he came home and suggested we spend time together fishing. He smiled and said, “Of course. Your uncle had already called the whole family for a barbecue by the river where we can fish.” Hearing that made my eyes light up, knowing I would get to experience fishing in nature with my dad. The thought filled me with excitement. He had been so busy with work and school, and spending time with him and the rest of the family felt like a special moment I have been waiting for.

Saturday at 7 AM everyone was in the car. I sat next to my older cousin and beside me, my sister was all excited and ready for that hour drive to Croton Point Park. We made it by 8 AM and my cousin rushed running into the open grass. We saw the immense water from one end of the mountain to the other. Running through the grasses as the geese flew away, honking at us in their language. Finally making it to a spot near the river bay to set our barbecue. As I turned to unpack, I heard a soft crunch behind me. A deer stood just a few feet away, its eyes calm as it grazed on berries. I slowly lay down on the grass, not wanting to startle it. I remembered what the Kratt brothers always said about respecting animals’ space. For a few minutes, I watched in silence, as we both shared the space, until my cousin shouted, and the deer bolted into the trees. I shook my head telling him not to scare it off; this was its home, after all. Still, I knew we had the whole day ahead to enjoy together as a family.

Around 10 AM my dad began to take out his fishing kit and my eyes widened as he revealed hooks, weights, and fish-shaped baits coming in green, red, and blue. It felt like unlocking a buried treasure chest. Once my dad pulled out the fishing rod my heart raced, I could barely contain my excitement. As my dad taught us how to fish, my mind kept thinking of that episode and everything they talked about. When it was finally my turn I threw the fishing line cutting through the sky landing with a splash, sinking down into the water. I stood still waiting for any movement and suddenly felt a strong pull. Yanking and pulling, I saw a striped bass emerging from the water as its dark stripes ran across its scales. Finally catching my very first fish felt like a moment where I was part of the nature around me.

Hours after hours, we caught fish together until sundown a total of 15 striped bass and of course released them into the wild having to convince my parents it wasn’t safe to eat them. As the blue ocean sky turned into the warm, glowing orange sky I came across a beaver who was chewing his way to a small tree, watching it fall causing a massive “BOOM”! It was amazing how such a small creature could drag it across and into the forest. Watching as the deers ran across the grass as the less humans went away to their cars it was an enjoyable moment to just be in the moment of all this.  

Packing up and heading home a long ride but a tired sleepy way back home in the car. Promising myself to return every summer I thought to myself on how deeply connected I became with nature. Fishing alongside my family allowed me to experience the peacefulness of the outdoors, the stillness of the water, and the quiet moments present waiting for a fish. I felt grateful for the  Wild Kratt’s, not only allowing me to be curious about the wildlife but also showing me how nature can bring people closer together, creating a stronger bond with me and my family in a way I hadn’t before.  

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“Wild Kratts.” Wikipedia: The Free Encyclopedia, Wikimedia Foundation, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wild_Kratts.

“Wild Kratts: Meet the Kratt Brothers.” PBS LearningMedia, NY PBS LearningMedia, https://ny.pbslearningmedia.org/resource/cc6cfdc0-dfde-44a5-95e4-facbdce89652/cc6cfdc0-dfde-44a5-95e4-facbdce89652/.